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− | page v, in the 'note' clause of the class PREFACING. | + | page v, section Preface. |
+ | in the 'note' clause of the class PREFACING. | ||
replace: | replace: | ||
"] | "] | ||
by: | by: | ||
]" | ]" | ||
+ | -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008 | ||
+ | |||
+ | from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) | ||
+ | page xiii, section student_preface/Abstraction. | ||
+ | middle of second paragraph. | ||
+ | replace: | ||
+ | you'll been encouraged | ||
+ | by: | ||
+ | you'll be encouraged | ||
+ | -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008 | ||
+ | |||
+ | from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) | ||
+ | page xv, section instructor_preface. | ||
+ | second paragraph, third bullet. | ||
+ | text: | ||
+ | Eiffel and Design by Contract | ||
+ | action: | ||
+ | put the last letter of "Contract" in bold. | ||
+ | -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008 | ||
+ | |||
+ | from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) | ||
+ | page xxi, section student_preface/OUTSIDE-IN: THE INVERTED CURRICULUM/The supporting software. | ||
+ | middle of second paragraph. | ||
+ | replace: | ||
+ | In the seond week | ||
+ | by: | ||
+ | In the second week | ||
+ | -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008 | ||
+ | |||
+ | from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) | ||
+ | page xxv, section student_preface/TECHNOLOGY CHOICES/Eiffel and Design by Contract. | ||
+ | right margin. | ||
+ | replace: | ||
+ | at tinyurl.com/cq8gw.. | ||
+ | by: | ||
+ | at tinyurl.com/cq8gw. | ||
+ | action: | ||
+ | remove extra dot. | ||
+ | -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008 | ||
+ | |||
+ | from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) | ||
+ | page xxix, section student_preface/TECHNOLOGY CHOICES/Why not Java?. | ||
+ | replace: | ||
+ | university context,it is meant | ||
+ | by: | ||
+ | university context, it is meant | ||
+ | action: | ||
+ | space after comma. | ||
+ | -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008 | ||
+ | |||
+ | from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) | ||
+ | page xxxiv, section student_preface/TOPICS COVERED. | ||
+ | paragraph starting with "Part III" | ||
+ | text: | ||
+ | It makes no attempt at | ||
+ | action: | ||
+ | missing end of sentence. | ||
-- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008 | -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008 | ||
Revision as of 20:27, 12 December 2008
Typos for "Touch of Class" draft
How to report a typo
Report it under the appropriate chapter title below. Please include the original section number. The page number is less important as it changes. The best is to copy-paste the relevant text extract and mark the faulty word(s), for example by **...**. It is convenient to show the extract as a display (start lines with spaces) and also, if you wish, to give your name.
For example:
In section 16.1, just after the first figure: Money, Pass, Map, Louvre, Orsay Money, Pass, **Louvre, Map**, Orsay Money, Map, Pass, Louvre, Orsay The second one is wrong. -- Luchin Doblies, 1.12.2008.
(Indeed Luchin Doblies reported this error -- thanks! BM.) The entry should appear in the section for the corresponding chapter (it does now). I am sorry that I will not be able to respond to individual comments, but I will consider all reports and correct the text as needed.
As errors get corrected I move the corresponding reports to the second part of the page ("Previously reported").
Preface etc.
from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) page v, section Preface. in the 'note' clause of the class PREFACING. replace: "] by: ]" -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008
from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) page xiii, section student_preface/Abstraction. middle of second paragraph. replace: you'll been encouraged by: you'll be encouraged -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008
from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) page xv, section instructor_preface. second paragraph, third bullet. text: Eiffel and Design by Contract action: put the last letter of "Contract" in bold. -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008
from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) page xxi, section student_preface/OUTSIDE-IN: THE INVERTED CURRICULUM/The supporting software. middle of second paragraph. replace: In the seond week by: In the second week -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008
from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) page xxv, section student_preface/TECHNOLOGY CHOICES/Eiffel and Design by Contract. right margin. replace: at tinyurl.com/cq8gw.. by: at tinyurl.com/cq8gw. action: remove extra dot. -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008
from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) page xxix, section student_preface/TECHNOLOGY CHOICES/Why not Java?. replace: university context,it is meant by: university context, it is meant action: space after comma. -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008
from Draft 22.02, 23 August 08 19:15 (Santa Barbara) page xxxiv, section student_preface/TOPICS COVERED. paragraph starting with "Part III" text: It makes no attempt at action: missing end of sentence. -- Eric Bezault, 12 December 2008
1 The industry of pure ideas
2 Dealing with objects
3 Program structure basics
4 The interface of a class
5 Just Enough Logic
6 Creating objects and executing systems
7 Control structures
8 Routines, functional abstraction and information hiding
9 Variables, assignment and references
PART II: HOW THINGS WORK
10 Just enough hardware
11 Describing syntax
12 Programming languages
13 Compilers and friends: the basic software tools
PART III: ALGORITHMS AND DATA STRUCTURES
14 Fundamental data structures, genericity, and algorithm complexity
15 Recursion and trees
16 Devising and engineering an algorithm: Topological Sort
PART IV: OBJECT-ORIENTED TECHNIQUES
17 Inheritance
18 Operations as objects: agents and lambda calculus
19 Event-driven design
20 Program correctness and proofs
PART V: TOWARDS SOFTWARE ENGINEERING
21 Introduction to software engineering
PART VI: APPENDICES
A Using the EiffelStudio environment
B Eiffel syntax specification
C An introduction to C++ (material by Nadia Polikarpova)
D An introduction to Java (material by Marco Piccioni)
E An introduction to C# (material by Benjamin Morandi)
EARLIER REPORTS (NOW CORRECTED)
Preface etc.
1 The industry of pure ideas
2 Dealing with objects
3 Program structure basics
4 The interface of a class
5 Just Enough Logic
6 Creating objects and executing systems
7 Control structures
8 Routines, functional abstraction and information hiding
9 Variables, assignment and references
PART II: HOW THINGS WORK
10 Just enough hardware
11 Describing syntax
12 Programming languages
13 Compilers and friends: the basic software tools
PART III: ALGORITHMS AND DATA STRUCTURES
14 Fundamental data structures, genericity, and algorithm complexity
15 Recursion and trees
16 Devising and engineering an algorithm: Topological Sort
In section 16.1, just after the first figure: Money, Pass, Map, Louvre, Orsay Money, Pass, **Louvre, Map**, Orsay Money, Map, Pass, Louvre, Orsay The second one is wrong. -- Luchin Doblies, 1.12.2008.
Section 16.3, topic "Cycles in the constraints", line 4-5: "A topological sort program gets its input **in the form individual ordering constraints**, ..." Missing "of": "in the form of" -- L.D., 1.12.2008
Section 16.4, topic "The Loop", second last line of the code-square: if “Any elements remain” then-- Report cycle: cycle_found := True “Insert these elements into **cyclist**” end I believe cyclist should be plural, "cyclists". -- L.D., 1.12.2008
Section 16.4, topic "The Candidates", second page, line 4: "What concrete **date** structure should we use for candidates?" "date structure" instead of "data structure". -- L.D., 1.12.2008
Section 16.7, second line: "..., such as the "<“ relation on numbers." The quotes do not match in font. -- L.D., 1.12.2008